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July 2017 Results

This month the judging reverted to me, your publisher and self-proclaimed lord of Zeroflash and to that end, I decided to let my love of Metafiction run riot. Having writted a Meta piece for a University project I became somewhat enthralled by the style, technique, genre, demented forth wall breaking method and thought, you know what, let’s see what the good Men and Women of the Zeroflash community can conjure-up…and my oh my…

The winners this month are…

3rd Place

The tiny little book of oblivion

by Mileva Anastasiadou

2nd Place

The Book Shelf

by Ben Marie

and in 1st place is…

Breaking Windows

by Jan Kaneen

Congratulations to all who entered this month and we can’t wait to read your works in August.

June 2017 Results

I used to be an outside cat.

But now that I’m locked inside I spend my Saturday nights in front of a roaring fire with a board game, swiping pieces onto the floor with my paw. I’ve thought about games a lot recently. I spent a lot of my youth crawling into these little boxed universes, learning, socializing having a laugh or a small thrill. Who doesn’t love Lewis Carroll, after all? My current project is even a retelling Mexican Loteria as archaeology. So when this month’s contest was announced I was well-aware it would be fun…but also a challenge.

I don’t know what I would have come up this month, judging them is hard enough. That is to say, admirable job everyone. There is quite a range to choose from— We’ve heard from the POV of both the players and the pawns from melodramatic Monopoly to Cluedo comedy.

While, I have the spotlight, let me thank the good folks at David at Zeroflash for the honor, as well as Ben Marie, last month’s judge, a brilliant man say some. Also Andrew Howell and Sophia Johnson for the keen illustrations. That was a cool bonus.

But now it’s time to see who cut the (Colonel) Mustard, as it were. Let the pieces fall where they may!:

Third Place

The First and Final Clue

by David Drury

DD covers a lot of ground here in a fast paced, fun little tale. It’s got physicality to it that I like. The story is in its details.

Second Place

Bert Moves On

by David Cook

What can I say? DC’s story is sad and it’s sweet.  It’s the first ten minutes of Disney’s Up. It’s got a sort of rhythm and a full stop. I bought it.

 First Place

Escape!

by Mike Murphy

But, I had to go with this tale of adventurous game pieces from Mike Murphy. It sparked my own imagination like a good game should. It gave me a “Five Characters in Search of an Exit” kinda vibe with more firepower.  Who hasn’t wondered about that eclectic bunch of monopoly tokens? From heavy artillery to house hold items, what couldn’t they do with a little teamwork if push came to shove? Thanks, MM. This made me think, and smile. And think some more.

May 2017 Results

Let me start by saying this: I am a big sci-fi nerd. So I was very happy to be the judge for this month’s competition. I grabbed myself a cup of tea, some soylent green wafers and delved into the entries. Trying to place them on the planetary scale from Earth to um Uranus when I have absolutely no qualification to do so.

In the pursuit of fairness I enlisted the help of my partner Sarah for a female perspective. She was also tasked with keeping me grounded in case being this month’s Intergalactic head of fiction judge went to my head.

As is it should be with the Sci-fi genre the entries stretched scientific knowledge in several different directions. There were dinosaurs, cosmic granny’s, intergalactic removalists, meat men and plenty of space travel.

But finally we arrived at our destination. I really did enjoy all the stories, but for me these were the shining stars. Keep in mind this is just one person’s opinion so please don’t hunt me down with phasers and/or lightsabers….

3rd Place

Beyond Infinity

by Kev Harrison

I really enjoyed the idea of this story, a tragic tale of things only working in theory. Because not everyone who goes through a black hole ends up inside a bookcase or slowly orbiting the earth as a foetus star child.

2nd Place

What the sea brings

by Ana Rita Mendes

My favourite story in terms of its tone and style. Atmospheric and poetic. I am still actually trying to work out what it was all about, but I quite enjoy a story that doesn’t reveal itself on first approach and can pull you through on language alone.  

1st Place

Ten thousand spoons

by F. Trautman

Humanity will always shine through in the technological age. For all our advancements the instinct to survive still controls us. For me this story was the right balance between sci-fi, horror and humour. If only there were some rations on board, perhaps some fava beans and a nice chianti….

Congratulations and well done to everyone on some great stories.

April 2017 Results

Horror is my favourite genre, so this month’s competition has been an utter delight to read. But as in any good horror story, there comes the thrill of dread…and I have to judge. This was incredibly challenging due to the amazing standard of writing, the clever plots, the alluring narrative and the sheer beautiful goriness of the entries.

As they came in, the stories jostled and pushed and bared fangs until a few truly monstrous ones emerged from the shadows. I looked for flow, structure, content, descriptive quality, imagery and impact…and how dry they left my mouth. If you aren’t on the list, it certainly isn’t because you didn’t scare the whatsit out of me or write beautiful horror. This was a truly wonderful collection of stories.

Honourable Mentions

Courtship of the Sewer King by S. E. Casey

Hunger by Natalie Ortiz

I found these two stories to be very chilling in as much as the horror seemed a ‘normal’ endeavour…a reasonable goal. The description, word usage and flow were excellent and the unsettling questions they both raised will linger with me. Well done and thank you!

Winners

3rd Place

Waiting for Dinner by Danny Beusch

I like the idea of the mundane being a portal to terror, and the ‘house’ that could mimic the best trap was incredibly engaging. It was interesting to peep into her world and be encouraged to feel the smallest flicker of remorse at her starvation. Reading it from the perspective of the aggressor was also a nice touch, and the sugar-rush ending was just…sweet! I wonder if high on sugar she’ll go out for feasts…plenty of plump pickings out there.

2nd Place

Resurrection by Stephanie Ellis

Wonderfully written, great imagery, beautiful referencing. I loved the depth to this story…how each sentence carried a whole backstory to it.  The sense of restrained righteous rage, the sweetness of revenge and the cool execution of it was stunning. It was also a particularly apt choice of plot. The use of varying sentence lengths—flowing musings and punchy deeds—made this a highly engaging piece. Thank you for this beautiful read.

1st Place

The Cellar by Ben Marie

It flows so smoothly—perhaps like the wine?—that at first, you don’t quite ‘get it’. You get wrapped up in all that intoxicating prose, lost in the romantic imagery of wine biding its moment and the intense descriptive detail in the narrative. But then hints come through, and you go back for another deeper sip and it grabs you…and then you think of that wine, resting there so innocently: full of bodies. For me, this slowly building awareness that settles in your gut first to swirl unpleasantly before rising up the gullet to go right to your head is a winner! Congratulations and thank you!

March 2017 Results

The competition asked for stories inspired by 1980s TV, plasma balls, new opportunities and a life full of chances, and I was amazed by the many ways this month’s authors built on these themes. I enjoyed all of the stories and there were several strong contenders, but the ones I kept coming back to were:

‘The Choice’

By Mike Murphy

On the brink of a new life, hard decisions need to be made. This is a beautifully written and entertaining twist on the well-known Bible story that sheds new light on the challenges of those 150 days and an early example of a man driving a species to extinction.

‘Can’t Ain’t Our Word’

By Sian Brighal

Perhaps more than any of the other stories, the narrator’s sense of wonder really captured the spirit of 80s television and film as I remember it. There’s an A-Team reference up front but by the end I pictured Jonas as a young Doc Brown from Back to the Future, definitely going somewhere…

‘Better like that’

By Alva Holland

The ‘Better like this?’ refrain does a wonderful job of anchoring us in the present during a visit to the opticians while the narrator trawls through past, from the bright lights of 70s discos to the present, recalling an entire marriage with just a few carefully chosen words.

I’ve been around and around on placings but my winner this month is…

‘Can’t Ain’t Our Word’ for its energy, its wonder and its innocence – all the things I remember as a child growing up in the eighties. Well done, Sian Brighal.

2nd place

‘Better like that’

By Alva Holland

3rd place

‘The Choice’

By Mike Murphy

February 2017 Results
So many great entries! So hard to choose… I narrowed it down to my three faves initially, which were:
 

How The Hell Do You Think They Pay for Bridge Maintenance, Anyway?
by Philip Kleaver

Comic violence in the same vein as Monty Python, I could almost imagine this scene appearing in a Terry Pratchett novel. I loved the dialogue and immediately liked all of the characters. This story was a lovely light in an otherwise dark theme.

Oedipus Spodge
by Jamie Thunder

 
Also comic, but much darker. I really liked that in addition to tackling the story from the trolls’ perspective, the author also gave us an insight into the unique language, culture and traditions of the troll world.
Troll Farming in Bergen
by Chris Stanley
 
An excellent imagination of a world where trolls are real and humans are… human. The world-building and the characterisation are done very well, and I love the depressing realism with which the myth has been treated.
My winner has to be… Troll Farming in Bergen. It was not an easy choice, but out of my shortlist it was the one that I most wanted to read again and again, and for there to be a second chapter of.
2nd Place
How The Hell Do You Think They Pay for Bridge Maintenance, Anyway?
by Philip Kleaver
3rd Place
Oedipus Spodge
by Jamie Thunder

January 2017 Results

1st Place
AWAY FROM IT ALL

by Jade Mitchell.

Good use of saying one thing but meaning another. We are told the main character is relaxed, however, through her actions we learn that the very opposite is in fact the case. Nice piece of writing.

2nd Place
ROLL THE DICE

by David Whitaker

Liked the futuristic element to the story. Very good.

3rd Place
THE KEEPER OF TEEHEES

by Alex Z. Salinas
This story made me laugh. Well done.

Special Mentions:

NO HOME FOR HOLLY – Alison Faye
NEW BEGINNINGS – Leigh Whiting
SPROUT – Jeremiah Telzrow

December 2016 Results

For the last competition of the year, we were hoping for something seasonal but rather different and that’s exactly what we got!

Reading all the entries, I realised just how talented all these dedicated writers are and we want to thank all of them and their social media efforts for spreading the word for the competition.

Now, without further ado, the Winners are…

1st Place

‘The Architects of Christmas’

by Jack Koebnig

I truly loved this story. The inventiveness and humour filled every sentence and I’m quite partial to the ambiguous nature of storytelling wherein the characters are simply un-named. A great work and a fun tale for Christmas.

2nd Place

‘Old Juliet’

by Rebecca Dempsey

Wow. What exquisite writing. The last paragraph stayed with me for hours.

3rd Place

‘Christmas Eve 1905’

 by Stephen Lodge

While the idea of a good-luck charm is not original, the humour that embeds this death-bed tale is more than enough to distract from the impending loss and says a lot about bequeathing power to lesser deserving individuals.

Special Mentions

‘Atwater’s Petunias’ by Evan Guilford-Blake

‘Lovers Reunited’ by Mileva Anastasiadou

Best of the Best Competition Results 2016

Judge: David J.Wing

Over the last year and a half I have been privileged to start this flash fiction competition and through it, meet some of the most incredibly gifted, honest and thoughtful people I have ever encountered. Writers, as we all know, can be a precious bunch and in their insecurities their can often be resentment and bitterness, but the men and women that have made this competition their monthly home have shown none of that frustration. Their love for writing and heartfelt congratulations and joy at others winning is what makes this competition worthwhile.

Some, most of the entrants, when they have won have told me that this is either their first win or the first time they.ve been paid for their hard work, or both. As soon as you are paid for a piece of writing, you ARE a professional! What a feeling! What a joy! What confidence that creates. To be able to gift that sense of achievement to friends and colleagues is a reward greater than money…although some money is often nice.

This month saw the first ‘Best of the Best’ competition. Now, this isn’t the best of the site’s entries, merely the best of the 1sts, 2nds and 3rds over the year. But, my word, are these some talented writers.

Thank you all for being so dedicated, sharing your work, sharing your successes on social media and thank you for the opportunity to work with you all.

Happy Christmas and congratulations.

1st

‘The First Time I saw Him’

by C.R.Smith

@carolrosalind

2nd

‘Upstairs, Downstairs

Lee Hamblin

3rd

‘Monsters’

Gary Buller

November 2016 Results

Guest Judge: Jack Koebnig

Like you guys, I love writing flash fiction. There’s just something so simple and utterly addictive to catching an idea, sitting down and spending thirty minutes or so getting lost in your story.

Well done to all those writers who entered November’s competition. You took the time to sit down and write – in my book there’s nothing sweeter.

It was an absolute pleasure to read (then re-read) November’s submissions. I enjoyed each and every one. Unfortunately, the nature of the beast dictates that I choose just three to pop on a pedestal. So without further ado, here are the results:

1st Place

‘Pokestop It’

by Claire Chen

Being obsessed with something is a condition most of us will probably experience at some point in our lives. And Claire’s story shows in an extremely entertaining way the potentially destructive force such single mindedness could very well ignite. Well done!

2nd Place

‘Like a Good Neighbour’

by Alex Z. Salinas

The build up to the final line is fantastic. Each time I read Alex’s story I arrived at the same conclusion: I wanted more. This story has legs and I for one would be very interested in its destination.

3rd Place

‘120 Seconds’

by Richard M. O’Donnell

The ending to Richard’s story is a killer. It resonates while you slowly digest the story. More than worthy of a place on November’s pedestal. Thumbs up!

Special Mentions

The Bad Samaritan by Stephen Selkirk

The Hitler Paradox by Liam Hogan

I Remember Paris by Kareen Getten

October 2016 Results

Guest Judge: Jennifer Lloyd

October is made for dark fiction and I could not wait to see what you all produced (and what nightmares it gave me later!). You did not disappoint.

Each piece struck its own unique chord. Some made me chuckle out loud. Others were poignant. More than a couple made my skin crawl and had me wishing I slept with a night light.

It was an honor to gobble up your excellent work like a monster hiding under the bed. These three are my top choices for October, although all were a great honor to digest.

1st Place

Captive

By Jack Koebnig

The storyteller showcased an outstanding ability to create an intense sense of place while, at the same time, leaving that very setting a total mystery to the reader until the end. The evocative descriptions created a deeply satisfying sensory experience throughout

One of my favorite parts of the story was the simile comparing the creaking floor boards to “a scream choked into submission.” Just fabulous turn of phrase.

I found myself waking up in a groggy, pre-dawn state this week feeling much like the main character, whose experience is surely among the greatest forms of torture known to mankind.

2nd Place

Goodnight Barry

by Myrto Zafeiridi

By encapsulating action, movement and reflection, this author struck a beautiful balance between horror and heartbreak.

The piece made me reflect on the idea of the monster lurking inside of us all, who inevitably — occasionally and, perhaps, unintentionally — hurts the ones we love dearest.

3rd Place

None So Blind

By Travis West

In addition to the unsettling yet stellar descriptions, my mind wandering back more than once to the circular nature of this creepy tale.

The main character’s end seems ironically fitting given her inability to see her surroundings for what they are. The story spins a subtle lesson about awareness, empathy, and, of course, avoiding dark alleyways.

Special Mention

Michael Snyder’s “Domestic Violence” was such an enjoyable read on every level, from the language to the climactic conclusion. Well done.


September 2016 Results

Guest Judge: Gary Buller @garybuller

You would not believe how difficult it was to somehow sort the fantastic selection of September’s entries into a top three. I know that it is scant consolation to those that didn’t make the all too short list, but you all did an absolutely fantastic job and made my life hell whilst trying to judge.

I know as a writer myself that these things are your babies, you’ve invested a lot of time in them and boy, did it show. Be proud of them, seriously, tell me to go take a long walk off a short pier and submit them to whoever will read them for publication. The prose in one or two that didn’t quite make it put the sum total of my published stuff to shame. They were that good. Still, here are my top three;

1st Place

‘Hothouse’

by Jennifer R Lloyd

This short story kept popping into my mind again and again after I’d read it, from washing the dishes to putting my daughter to bed it kept niggling me in a good way.

A family man goes through the monotony of day to day life with an apparently sinister secret that keeps the reader guessing to the wonderful conclusion at the very end. This could be any of us. I absolutely love a story with a clever twist, and this ticked all the boxes for me.

2nd Place

‘Time Warp’

by Sandra Arnold

An intelligent piece of flash fiction with a social commentary. We are told throughout our lives to never judge a book by a cover, but we are all guilty of it at some time or another.

Sandra Arnold’s judgemental protagonist ignorantly stumbles her way through a story where perceptions are continually challenged right through to the very last sentence where a smoking couple turn and wave as she drives away.

This story made me smile. I could relate, a wonderful tale.

3rd Place

‘The Bracelet’

by Jack Koebnig

Two lovers talk before a final meeting in a post apocalyptic world destroyed by an atomic bomb. The simple but beautiful prose leads the reader through what has led them to this final meeting and touches on a society that has changed and not necessarily for the better.

The final reveal in the tale that occurs as the male character is looking at the symbol of their love, a bracelet that he has crafted himself. It shocked me and delighted me in equal measures, and enticed me to re-read it just to reassess my perceptions.

Special Mention

I don’t even know if I can do this, but I really liked the world that Stephen Lodge created in ‘The Shipwreck of The Salty Lash.,’ and I thought that it was a fantastic story. I will be sure to check him out on Twitter.


August 2016 Results

Guest Judge: C.R.Smith

I’ll keep it short because I’m tired from travelling back from Amsterdam and I imagine you’re all on tenterhooks waiting to find out who’s won August’s competition.

The standard, as usual, is incredibly high. I’ve thoroughly enjoyed reading each and every one of the stories, several times over; unfortunately there can only be one winner.

1st Place

‘A New Arrival’

by Gary Buller

There are so many good lines in this piece, from the struggle to find the appropriate screwdriver to the sourcing of parts on eBay. Not to mention Grandfather’s remains being signed over and used to create the next generation. It puts you in mind of a future where 3D printers are capable of creating practically anything.

2nd Place

‘Beer Joint’

by Janice Rothganger

This is a great story, told well. Nice idea to describe every thing Mike won’t be doing, especially as you soon realise the minute he gets that recipe right everything will unfold in exactly the same way.

3rd Place

‘Dust’

by Cath Barton

Everything is definitely slowing down here. Life has become too much of an effort, and there’s a gentle resignation to events unfolding beyond your control. Lovely writing.

So, there you have it. I wish I could have picked out more stories, but three’s the limit.


July 2016 Results

Guest Judge: Alyson Faye

It’s actually a cliche to say this judging gig is tougher than you think, but it is. In the end I chose the stories I most enjoyed, which entertained me, that read most seamlessly and drew me back for a re -read. I have read all the entries a few times. There are others in this month’s comp which are well written too, stylish and entertaining but there can’t be 19 winners. It was a tough call between the 2nd and 1st place as well.

I personally love reading horror fiction, short or long and enjoy writing it too. So this month’s competition theme was great for me. A good wallow in horror. I’m taking Stephen King’s ‘Salem’s Lot’ away with me on holiday for a re read. One of the greats.

3rd place :- ‘Done Fishing’ by Carl R Jennings

The opening paragraph set the scene effectively, the ensuing dialogue between the two fishermen revealed much about them and their relationship, the last line made me smile. It was a clever spoof on the monster from the black lagoon idea leaving not so much terror in its wake but apathy and indifference. Nicely done.

2nd place:- ‘Gotta Catch Em All’ by G.H. Finn

The opening lines really flowed, drawing the reader in. Cape Wrath- great name- you can just see the place can’t you? The story is topical with its Pokemon theme which is rather appealing. The play on words to do with faith/pilgrimage was well done, (there are other word plays going on throughout- milking the language), the dialogue gradually hints at more danger coming along and there’s a stormingly good last line. It was witty and punchy. It was amusing the way the older’ brother’ reins in and rebukes his younger ‘sister’. I wanted to re read this one to pick up all the clues, hints and spot the mood gear change. This one stuck with me. Great fun too.

1st place:- ‘You Can’t Get Away’ by C R Smith

This story really held me and also made me think, about the monsters we parents ‘authorize’ as being acceptable to introduce to our children. An interesting line of thought which strikes a true chord with any parent. The piece is cleverly constructed with a careful choice of language, ‘I was a difficult child…’ can be taken several ways for instance. The whole piece flows, drawing you in, showing both child’s and parents’ differing responses. So it is richly layered, important when the words are limited. When you reach the last line, which reveals the ‘true’ nature of the monster, you want to go back and re read the piece to place your newly acquired knowledge in to the narrative. So it is a piece which benefits and grows from more than one reading of it. The last line is powerful – the cycle of parental monster mongering continues, there is no escape.


June 2016 Results

After a cup of tea and a fortifying piece of cake, I’ve finally managed to make a decision. Thank you everybody for sharing your wonderful responses to June’s prompts. Like the before me judges have said, it is difficult to chose just one but …. Ta dah!

First Place

Cathedral Crow

By Alyson Faye

I loved the motif of the crow – it captured my imagination. The writer’s observations about the narrator’s family responses to the ‘avian shadow,’ painted wonderful pictures in my head. The twist at the end of the story was wonderful. I loved the last line.

Second Place

Bridges

By Alex Z Salinas

A poignant, tender story. The writer offers the reader a feast of fabulous details – including the ‘yellow bicycle,’ the ‘dark unibrow.’ I loved the image of Billy, pedalling quickly ‘lifting his butt off the seat.’ Again, there is a surprise for the reader.

Third Place

The Girl With Holes in Her Knees

By Katie Lewington

I loved the way the writer incorporated a range of senses to tell her story. The lingering taste of a pint, the touch of a brick wall, the sound of the stones hitting the water, and the physicality of the narrator’s actions including hair being caught in a branch. As for the ending – this time the reader is left to wonder about the strange busker and his strange song.

Thank you everybody for participating this month. It was an honour and a pleasure to read your fabulous words. Good luck for July.

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This judging malarkey has been a real eye opener. There will be no more cock snooking from me when people say it’s a difficult job because it really, really is. It’s so subjective – one minute you like one story best, the next another, but I had to stop somewhere and this is where I ended this morning.

First Place

The Helter Skelter

by Bibi Hamblin

I loved the universe of this – a nightmare dystopia where women’s freedoms are curtailed, very topical and very believable, unsettlingly so especially with its witch finder general imagery – latter-day ducking chairs and scold’s masks resurfacing in a misogynist paradise. The images left in my mind were lingering and vivid. They’re still haunting me actually.

Second Place

The Resistance

by Daisy Warwick

The shape and voice of this were expert. The first paragraph is flawless, setting everything in place, time and atmosphere so succinctly. The voice is very distinctive, rebellious and accepting; ironic and world weary, seeing everything and being able to do nothing… and the one-word ending. Brilliant!

Third Place

Wood Smoke and Goat

by Lee Hamblin

The language is at once sparse and poetic, ‘kicking up a veil of white,’ ‘spits into a callused hand,’ ‘Dr Usui wipes a window free of mist, and through a circle we search the horizon,’ – pitch perfect. Everything in this world is strange and unexplained, the setting, the curtailed train tracks, the lyrical names.  You can feel the cold.

Honourable Mentions

As I found it so difficult to pin winners down I’d like to give some Honourable Mentions to two stories that kept falling in and out of my top three and one that fell in right at the end.

Cath Barton’s Fish Knives is soooo clever idiolect-wise and disturbingly weird.

The Burden of Death by Edward Carney which is like a supernatural urban myth and made me empathise with/feel sorry for, the Grim Reaper himself.

Abandoned by Craig McGeady –  The use of language is so insightful and unexpected – ‘ferocity of nature,’ ‘thickest mystery,’ ‘insects clouding the air.’

Right, seriously relieved that’s over. Well done everybody and good luck for next month.


Thank you for your patience while I made my final decision. I know every judge has to say this, but the process definitely wasn’t easy! I was told there were more entries than ever this month. Something about the April prompt must have really resonated because you guys came up with some great stuff.

Without further ado, here are the winners of the April competition.

First Place

The Catch

By Jan Kaneen

Beautifully written, beautifully formatted, and left me guessing in the best way possible from start to finish. The narrator’s “amnesia” was handled superbly. Not once did I think the mystery of this story wasn’t in masterful hands. I was hooked.

Second Place

The Duck Incident

By Cath Barton

Cath utilized a second-person narrative voice that completely succeeded. I felt utterly immersed in the events of the story, and the closing lines were just incredible. Props for giving the butchery a timestamp and making me glance nervously at the clock on my bedside table.

Third Place

And One for the Little Boy Who Lives Down the Drain

By Lee Hamblin

I had to switch the light on the moment I read the title of this entry. Great, great voice; the author managed to seamlessly blend the everyday concerns of a little girl with the not-so-everyday subterranean friend she visits. Sweet and eerie, like those strawberry hard candies your grandmother never seems to run out of.

Honorable Mentions

I love creepy stories. It’s the reason I was so eager to accept the judging position for this month’s competition. But two entries really tickled me with their oddness and humor, and I can’t sign off from judging without at least giving them a mention.

Cucumber Confusion

By Tom Moody

Village Boredom

By Daisy Warwick

Both of these stories read almost like anti-jokes to me, and they held a special place in my heart all month. Thanks for the laughs you two!

And thanks to everyone who entered! I can’t wait to see what Zero Flash has in store for May.

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First off, I’d like to say that judging the March competition wasn’t easy.  I have trouble between deciding between Sicilian and margherita pizza when I go out to dine, so choosing the top three entries from among twelve submissions was hard.  Really hard. Really really hard.
Writing well takes concentration, obsessive dedication to detail, and a dogged determination to get whatever bizarre, funny, haunting or piercingly honest idea that’s floating around in one’s brain out into the world for strangers to gape at.  I’ll tell you a secret: all writers are show-offs, even the ones who profess to be shy.  We may be tongue-tied when we’re forced to make small talk at a dinner party with people we don’t know, but put us alone in a room in front of a computer keyboard and we’re shameless exhibitionists. The only difference is that we don’t flash our naughty bits, we flaunt our ideas, and boy, do we love to strut our stuff.
If some publisher tells us that they love what we sent them, then we adore them forever.  We run on praise, we writers.  So here’s some praise from me to every one of the people who submitted flash in March:  you guys amazed me.  I loved all the entries.
The decision was tough, but after much consideration;
First place
“Impossible Son”
by Miranda Ray
I adore mythology, all mythology, especially when it gets weird, and Norse mythology is very weird indeed.  Odin the all-father, muses that if his existence played out like a marathon of Maury, he would always be the father.  It’s his occupation.  That cracked me up, as did, “You like your grand-daughter, but you don’t see her often.  She’s in Hell.”  And the statement, “Your impossible son is also the mother of your horse.  You try not to think about it.” Genius!
Second place
“In a Barren World”
by Cath Barton
It tolls like a bell, with lines like, “I walked to the western wall and held my ear to the granite.” Lovely stuff. I wish it were a novel. I’d gobble up every word.
Third place
“Eve,”
by Lee Hamblin
It’s a fierce, beautiful depiction of motherhood at the dawn of the world.  Raw and gritty and very beautiful.  I loved it.

February saw Cath Barton taking the reigns as guest judge…here are her thoughts and thanks so much for taking part.

Funky, odd, strange – how does it work?

Reading all the wonderfully quirky entries in this month’s competition this was the question I asked myself. What makes a strange story hit the spot at this micro (300 word) length? There’s not room for too many characters or too much to happen without confusing your reader. But you still want a beginning, a middle and an end. Or at least I do.

My conclusion is the successful micro story paints a clear focussed picture. In the same way as images can inspire our stories, those micro stories that work leave us with a strong, lingering image. Each of the stories I chose did this for me and, in its oddness, evoked something a bit disturbing.

Thank you all for entrusting your work to me, and to David for inviting me to the table. It’s been a privilege.

1st Place

The Girl in the Green Hoodie

by Jill Hand

A story which starts in the everyday and leads us into a mystery. I love the image of “scarlet ribbons wrapped round her wrists.” The story is complete and yet leaves me wondering. Just what I want.

2nd Place

Dogs Will Be Cats

by Tuppy Bee

@TuppyBee

The dog “from another planet” made me laugh. A smart, nicely paced story with a great ending and a brilliant title too.

3rd Place

Friends

by Jack Koebnig

@koebnig

There was an ‘ah’ moment towards the end of this story which was neatly achieved. I really liked the central conceit about fish into man.

Cath Barton.

This January competition saw you hark back to your childhoods and delve into the dark. I enjoyed them all immensely. Some of you referred to therapy…that’s all I’ll say on the matter 😉

And the winners are…

1st Place

Pretty in pink

by Cath Barton

@CathBarton1

2nd Place 

The Odd Looking Man In A Green Velvet Coat

by Stephen Shirres

@The_Red_Fleece

3rd Place

Hope

by Daisy Warwick

@WarwickDaisy

December of 2015 is at an end. That means, the results are in. Thank you so much for your descriptive and often magical entries. I felt chills and frostbite alike. I hope you all enjoyed yourselves and got all those presents you asked Santa for.

Congratulations to this month’s winners:

1st Place

Shake Me

by Carol R.Smith

@carolrosalind

2nd Place 

Promises to Keep

by Jack Koebnig

@koebnig

3rd Place

Matchstick Bride

by Abigail Van Kirk

@VkAbigail

—–

And here as they say are the votes of the Scottish juror …

First of all, I would like to say a big thank you to everyone who took the time to enter November’s competition. I had an absolute blast being guest judge. I was confronted with some pretty amazing stories which thankfully made my job extremely difficult. You all deserve a huge round of applause. I’m looking forward to joining you in entering December’s competition.

Congratulations to this month’s winners:

1st Place

CLOWN

by Cath Barton

2nd Place 

GETTING OUT

by Jan Kaneen

3rd Place

THE BONE MAN

by Lee Hamblin

Keep writing @koebnig

—–

October is over and Halloween has been. I hope you kids all got your candy allotment.

This month’s competition was scary and I want to thank all the entrants for putting their Stephen King hats on and delving deep into the belly of our tunnel prompt.

And so, with no further delay, our winners this month are…

1st Place

Pocket Money

by Jack Koebnig

@koebnig

2nd Place

Don’t read this if you want to live

by Jan Kaneen

@jankaneen1

3rd Place

Goose

by Cath Barton

@CathBarton1

CONGRATULATIONS TO ALL!

September’s competition is at an end. Our gnomes have all been gobbled-up and it’s time to announce the winners. Thank you for your entries. I am particularly fond of the science fiction and fantasy genres and note that many flash fiction competitions veer strongly towards the literary and poetic. Thanks for stretching your fingers to type words with a fantastical slant this month.

1st Place

Action!

by Tuppybee

@Tuppybee

2nd Place

Gone Gnome

by F.E.Clark

@feclarkart

3rd Place

HQ

by Mike Gibas

@mikegibas

CONGRATULATIONS TO ALL!

That’s the end of our second competition and I must say, it’s getting more and more difficult to judge.

This month you were inspired by an odd fellow, his trombone and a heard of cows. The stories you sent in were a joy to read and I welcome you all to submit again.

And without further ado…

1st Place

VEX ME

by Charles L.Crowley

@ApatheticSlug

2nd Place

The Hardest Word

by Lee Hamblin

@kali_thea

Joint 3rd Place

Dark Shapes

by

Nod Ghosh

@nodghosh

and

Making Noise

by David Novak

@dumbstupidfake

CONGRATULATIONS TO ALL!

Well people, thanks for making the first Zero Flash competition a headache to judge.

There’s been some great submissions and I’ve enjoyed reading them all.

With no further preamble, here are your Winners.

1st Place

Corpus Corvidae

by Levi Noe

2nd Place

Snared

by Jayne Buxton

Joint 3rd Place

The Field

by Jack Koebnig

and

The space between heartbeats

by Eileen Merriman

CONGRATULATIONS TO ALL!

Please feel free to add comments and thoughts. We’d welcome your input.

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